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Hi, I'm Alex and I wrote this short Cinderella scene from the mouse's point of view.


I'm hiding inside my house in Rat Town when I heard a sad cry.  I went outside to check who it was.  The voice sounded familiar to me.

"Cinderella is that you? Why are you crying?" I asked. She said nothing as if she didn’t notice that I was there. 

She ran outside so I followed her. It was dark outside so I opened my lamp. I ran fast to catch up with her. That’s when I noticed that a few farm friends were also running with me. 

Then suddenly a light came towards me. No, I was wrong! I thought it’s coming towards Cinderella! I quickly ran towards her to try to protect her. A big ball of light flashed in front of us. Wow! I thought it was the Prince, but I was wrong yet again!

It was a fat old lady with a spoon. The fat lady came towards Cinderella. She was singing and waving her spoon around.  Then she waved her spoon and pointed it to me! I got scared and started to run and tried to find a hiding place. TOO LATE!

She blasted a little light into my mouth. I had no choice but swallow it. Yuck! I could feel pins and needles on my legs. I began to grow bigger and bigger. I could see my mummy from here! 

Oh no! My worst nightmare had come true! I turned into a human servant or as the fat lady says, the Coachman! 

MY other friends turned into a horse or a pie. And finally, Cinderella…Wow! look at her! She looks beautiful with that long white and sparkly gown!

What a night!



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shiny
8/10/2012 09:56:03 am

imaginative perspective writing, and nice division of paragraphs!

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Grace
8/10/2012 06:26:55 pm

Nice one, Alex! Looking forward to reading more.. Keep writing.. continue on honing this talent of yours.

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ann
20/8/2018 06:27:53 am

wow

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